LOVE TRIAL

by LUCKY NGWENHA   Jul 11, 2012


FIRSTLY SHE ASKED IF I COULD GIVE HER SOME TIME
IT WASNT A CRIME,I FOUND IT SHORT SIMPLE AND SLIME.
SECONDLY SHE ASKED IF WE COULD KNOW EACH OTHER
AND TRY BUILD A RELATIONSHIP LIKE HER'S WITH HER MOTHER.
THIS RELATIONSHIP SURPASSED TO BOSSOM LOVERS
AN ADVANTAGE ADDED TO DISCOVERING EACH OTHER'S UNCOVERS.
THROUGH OUT THE WAY I KEPT NAGGING FOR HER LOVE APPROVAL
INSTEAD I KEEP GETTING LOVE DISAPPROVAL.
THE BEST ANSWER I COULD GET WAS "ILL TELL YOU WHEN I'AM READY"
STILL I KEPT WAITING FOR HER AS I WAS PEDDY.
SHE FILLED EVERY SECTION OF MY HEART WITH HER CHARM
THAT WHENEVER I TRY TO REMOVE HER I CAUSE A HARM.
I'AM IN A LOVE TRIAL THAT HAS NO PROMISE FOR LOVE
I'AM STILL WAITING FOR HER TO BE READY.

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  • 12 years ago

    by LUCKY NGWENHA

    Thanks just a poem from current love exprience.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maalouf

    Good poem!

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    So well-written

    • 12 years ago

      by LUCKY NGWENHA

      THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENT.WROTE THIS POEM FROM WHAT I'AM GOING THROUGH.

  • 12 years ago

    by Blood of a Lion

    Need to take away the all caps, I'm not trying be a critic or anything but a lot of people consider that kind of writing sloppy and uninteresting.
    But it had its moments going through it.

    Good work.