This part right here, surprised me

I blame society
And its macho-culture
All based on
Those damn Greek sculptures

--I'm not familiar with Greek sculptures, but I do know a bit about the macho-culture.
They feel superior and can't even consider other's opinions.

"And shone it bright"
I think this line would read better if it was "And it shone bright"

To me, I think you should have kept up the rhyming like you did in the first stanza... I felt like it lost a little bit of it's flow.

I'm not familiar with Greek sculptures either. I know about the macho-culture... competitiveness, always wanting to be the Alpha.

Overall, this is a great piece...lots of emotion. Great job.

Bigotry. I hate when people are like this.

I feel heartache for people on the other side of it getting judged for who they are. It makes me angry.

I didn't realy think of Greek sculptures representing that but I guess I am seeing things differently every day.

Awesome

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