Tricks

:| I can relate to this

I hate the idea of being used because it is not a good feeling at all.

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I love the idea you created here! Such strength here....and I like how you used the dots at the end, where they just for emphasis on your voice saying you will not be traded?

I like the idea of someone who promises you with a life when he only wants a one night stand.

Cool write, except in the the last lines, I do not know why you inserted dots between every two words.

God damn it yaki i looooove this!!!

Short and wonderful, you can really feel the emotion in it like BOOM!

A great write as always :-)

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Even though this does hold a lot of meaning, emotions and depth, I still would love it if it was a bit longer and written in details for the reader to understand the story well. Dunno why I'm dumb these days, not digging enough. o.o