Comments : R.I.P.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    May his soul rest in peace, just stay storng okay?

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    This reads like you lost a dear friend who lost/took his life suddenly.

    I feel your pain and your grief but we must march one. For time and life do not wait.

    We are here for you

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I was so touched when I read this poem in the thread, it blew me away from the openess and rawness from the words - drenched in sadness.

    The part that got me was the part where you wrote "I'm sorry I didn't take the chance that I had too see you when I could, and now you are dead."

    It breaks my heart to think that there are people who don't get chances to say goodbye to the ones we love. It has happened to me and it is something I always think about.

    Awesome write

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This was really good, I got chills.