It's rather short, but very nice imagery. I loved this poem. I appreciate darkness.

Stellar! I like the double rhyming you have. I enjoyed the flow.

I really like this, like I've said you write wonderful dark poetry.

The rhyming is flawless.

Great write!

Good job!

Nice flow and imagery

I especially like this part:

the distance seems has grown
along with all this hurt

5/5

I love how you made all the lines rhyme except for the last one, there's something to be said about that, as if you are trying to say that it has to have some kind of meaning, that the pain is what we need to notice.

Awesome

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