Comments : Once

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Roses are indeed beautiful. Beautiful to look at but hard to reach them for they are protected by those thorns.

    Its like you have given the rose a character where she thrives in a beauty of loneliness, where her beauty is a sacrifice that is untouched and left alone; and you put yourself as her admirer by waiting patiently to have her. Not sure if that made any sense to you but that is the picture I got from reading this :)
    Nicely penned!

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    You have a tender soul,

    "The flower will find
    She is loved and not alone anymore"

    - My favorite line. Always so gentle in your writing, and such a unique and sweet way of expressing yourself. I feel like I could really relate to this write - that doesn't often happen. It moved me. 5/5

    mandy :)