There is a sweet tone to this piece and while reading this poem it gives a feeling and image of olden times. I also like the repetition of this line:

"Forever love, forever you"

It reinforces your true feelings and it does not sound like you are simply saying it but truly are feeling it.

"You have wings,
To follow your dreams.

I also like how you ended this love poem with a positive and encouraging note rather then the usual line which every love poem has! So all in all a lovely tender write :)

So gentle, peaceful.
"Your eyes are like soft starlights" - Beautifully expressive poem. 5/5

mandy :)

I can't say more i read ur poems all are really full of love.