Comments : I Musn't Do It

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    That is strange... I knew from that title it was about self harming - I don't know why, just my thoughts instantly went to that.... I was right!
    Good poem, nice word choice and I like the way its like a conversation with yourself to stop yourself following the urges.

    good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Misshapenheart21

    This is such a powerful poem!
    It can relate to it... And the emotions you used described everything I thought when I was in that position...
    You're a fantastic writer.
    If this poem
    Is about you Please stay strong-
    Know that you are loved and that a blade won't solve anything it will only make things
    Worse-
    Thank you for such a
    Great poem

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  • 12 years ago

    by Misshapenheart21

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    by Misshapenheart21

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