Flaws (Never Wanted You)

Great song, could actually start to feel the rhythm in this writing and perhaps could visualize it being sung by the likes of Nickleback or someone.

I'm such a lost cause,
I'm such a lost cause,
you don't see me,
just my flaws,
I'm such a lost cause,
I'm such a lost cause,
you don't see me,
just my flaws,

- loved the chorus and the fast flow it has to it, really stands strong and shows how your feeling.

Is there something I can say,
is there something I can do,
to make you want to stay,
to make you see it through,

- I loved this bit because it shows the feeling of desperation and hope that this person will stay. The fact you are almost pleading to do anything for them to stay. This shows exactly how much they mean to you.

I never wanted you,
I never wanted you,
I never wanted you,
you had me hypnotized,
I never wanted you,
I never wanted you,
I never wanted you,
I just got lost in your eyes,
I never wanted you,
I never wanted you,
I never wanted you,
you never wanted to try,
I never wanted you,
I never wanted you,
I never wanted you,
I need you in my life...

- what I really liked from this line is that I picked up a sense of denial within yourself. Like it is easier to admit you never wanted them and you try to convince yourself of that... and in the end, in your very last line you express it was more than a want but infact a need. I love how this was done.

Good job.