So in Love with you

by LittleMermaid   Jul 13, 2012


I might have failed to open up and share,
that these feelings are not new
With this treasured care hidden in my heart,
I've realized, I'm so in love with you.

Like the summer evening ending tiresome days,
and the monsoon rain clearing the cloudy sky
Your smile cheers me up and worries end
there you make my day, I now understand why.

I have heard people in love saying
days are suddenly beautiful and the sky is more blue
Things have changed in some way
and it's amazing, for now, I feel that too.

My eyes enclosing beautiful spring dreams
are now destined to make it true
Feeling of warmness even in snowy nights
with winter breeze whispering "I'm so in love with you!"

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  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Lovely LM... I liked the feel and flow of this... it just kept me hooked .. And it feels so different when u are in love and you explained it well in this:)

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Oh my goodness, I LOVE IT, so going on wall of favorites, great job, your heart has created a most treasurable gift, the talent of words, your heart holds the secret to wonderful poetry

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Oh my goodness, I LOVE IT, so going on wall of favorites, great job, your heart has created a most treasurable gift, the talent of words, your heart holds the secret to wonderful poetry

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Well written, LM!

    Hold on to that one person that makes you feel that way. Love is so precious and often so fragile at the start. Be sure to always act from the heart and speak from the soul and you'll be okay:)

    It was nice to read what your country looks like in between the lines. When time permits I will want to see how you live in that beautiful country of yours:)

    Keep writing!
    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    OH, I really touch with the last message of your poem..it so lovely and well written piece...I missed reading with your poems, too..friend..just keep it up and write more beautiful poems:))5/5

    ~goodbless

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