Nicely penned piece Shanix. |
by CryingHeart
A very good piece :) 5/5 |
by Lioness
I can see why it is in the love section because that clearly can be felt with your words but the sadness drenched in them can be felt too. |
I think "though" on the first line is supposed to be "thought"... if I'm reading it correctly. |
by DarkLight
Thanx guys,@ lizette checkin it out @lioness you are right @crying heart, thanx |
by Jyoti Rawat
Its really very nice some lines are very true like |
by Ben Pickard
Great write - I can relate to this one! |