Nice flow my friend! Enjoyed it.

This poem seems to have a sad air about it. I followed your link and listened...not that I could understand a word of her song..it was soothing and beautiful. With the lyrics on the screen I could kind of sing along a little but had no clue what I was singing lol

I enjoyed this piece too Karla. :) You do shine!!

I was wondering who this person was and I am glad you put the link there, it gives the poem more of a reality feel, as if that we are there with you.

You are right - the words of the song I could not understand but the music itself was lovely.

The sadness though in the words of your poem can be felt. Especially when you are talking about death :( breaks my heart

x

Will comment later but keep in mind...you are a sweetheart. And an exquisite poetess too.

Wow, what amazing flow. Great job.
Karla you mispelled my name when you were commenting my peom. Lol