Comments : Poetry Pyramid
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12 years ago
by nouriguess
'He sould write a nice poem'
should? And I guess 'nice' is a bit cliche for 'poetry', I know you need a short word for the pyramid but nice isn't creative. I like what you've done here. A cute idea, even though the top of the pyramid was chopped off. :O
Keep writing. ;)-
12 years ago
Thank you for your comments! Maybe you can return back to the poem and give again your opinion.
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12 years ago
What an unique write Khalid
well penned, the shape of a christmas tree
I love it-
12 years ago
Thank you! Can't imagine this means a lot to me.
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12 years ago
by nouriguess
Oh, you added the 'oh'! Yep, looking like a real pyramid now. I like shaped poetry. I challenge you to write a piece in the shape of your blood group! I've done that once. ;;)
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12 years ago
Well this depends on how easily shaped your blood group. Moreover, my blood group is 'A'. What's yours?
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12 years ago
by nouriguess
O :P But I understand. I didn't even have the courage to submit it here. It didn't make much sense to me.
