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by Khalid M Darwish
Nicely penned piece! Well done. Just in the 3rd stanza 'Knowing that your with her' the 'your' should be 'you're' This aside, I enjoyed the flow.
by Courtney aka TrippMachine
Love this poem added it to my favs keep up the grate work <3
by X Harlea X
I enjoyed reading this, good job. 5/5