Comments : Just Friends (Collab)

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Nicely penned piece! Well done.
    Just in the 3rd stanza 'Knowing that your with her' the 'your' should be 'you're'
    This aside, I enjoyed the flow.

  • 12 years ago

    by Courtney aka TrippMachine

    Love this poem added it to my favs keep up the grate work <3

  • 12 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    I enjoyed reading this, good job. 5/5