Missing togetherness.

by Sanket Sonawane   Jul 14, 2012


Its the month of vacations and everyone's planning trips,
I get a news and my heart switch trips..

My love says she's going on a Delhi trip for 10 days,
And in utter loneliness, it is me who stays..

She's gone by miles and i miss her smiles,
And all i have is our photo files..

There will be no contact with her till she comes back,
That thought made me give the wall a smack..

I hope this time of void in my life passes away soon,
And when she gets back, i am sure, i will take her to the moon..

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  • 12 years ago

    by Sanket Sonawane

    You people know what, i never seriously wrote, even when i knew i could, but now i did it and i thank you so much for your comments..it means a lot to me..thanks guys..appreciate it!!

    • 12 years ago

      by Sanket Sonawane

      Guys, please can you read my other poem(my daddys birthday) and let me know what u feel about it??

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    "She's gone by miles and i miss her smiles,
    And all i have is our photo files.."

    Omg! I love this and also the ending with the moon and soon.. those rhymes are heartfelt.

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Brilliant! It directly shoots the heart. I enjoyed thrhyming and flow.