Brilliant! It directly shoots the heart. I enjoyed thrhyming and flow.

"She's gone by miles and i miss her smiles,
And all i have is our photo files.."

Omg! I love this and also the ending with the moon and soon.. those rhymes are heartfelt.

You people know what, i never seriously wrote, even when i knew i could, but now i did it and i thank you so much for your comments..it means a lot to me..thanks guys..appreciate it!!