This is good, I like the idea of it, having someone as a mistake but then realising they were a good mistake. This can relate to many relationships we have with people, not just a love relationship.

I do however, think that if you punctauted this with the correct use of comma's and full stops it would break it up easier for the reader. Then this way you can create how it is meant to be read and takes away the stress from the reader to decide when to take a breathe. It deserves to be read properly, where as now it reads as one over stretched sentence.

Nice poem though and loved your title choice.

Love this poem added it to my favs keep up the grate work <3

Love this poem added it to my favs keep up the grate work <3

This reminds me of my bestfriend. i loved her so much because she was like a sister to me we had so much fun. but she always hurt me and i always let her. even though i knew i shouldnt. ... but i finally did this year.