Comments : Abuse

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Excellent poem, I loved this one. It is full of so much, it holds anger and sadness and pain but at the same time towards the end it has strength courage and bravery.

    I liked the story form of it, it flowed quite well and rhymed and I enjoyed reading it.

    Abuse is such a horrible thing to have to go through and you should never be on your own. If this is true, I hope it has stopped now like this poem states.