Comments : A girl in pain

  • 12 years ago

    by Georgia

    I really liked this sweetie. your a great writer.
    I can relate to certain things in this poem and it was well written. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Pain comes to widen reasoning. At the verge of pain, lessons come. Lesson learned, saves a future blame. But wheat ferments, for a good brew. From tears of agony, gems rise. Against all odds, victory abounds.