Meena,

Powerful words and imagery. Very detailed flow through your main topic of vengeance. Indeed, an excellent expression of one's inner turbulence poem.

I voted 5, wonder why it showed 4? I tried but it seems no way to edit anymore. Really apologize...

It's definitely 6/5!

I've realized that you always try formed poetry and I like that, even if I might not have commented before, I feel as though I always learn something new when reading your poems and the fact that you're willing to try so many different forms really shows your skills. :)

Actually I never liked nature poems, but once I wrote one or two little poems myself I started to realize their beauty and I think that yours conveys it too. Your choice of words captivated me and made me feel the content more.

I really enjoyed this poem and think you did a good job.

Meena,

That was a fantastic write asnd you really mastered the form very well.

Powerful words!

Gud poem meena..

How can a poem of destruction be so beautifully worded? I missed reading your work it's always a breath of fresh air
TJ

'vengeance on this materialistic earth'

Awesome yaar...just mindblowing :)

Trying to catch up with great collection of PR & your formed poetry just ROCKS :)

all the best and take care

Wonderful Meena!!!

Very beautiful meena . nice harmony of music and imagery.
still think form poetry wrinkles you humongous soul