by Scum Queen Jul 18, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Dark and brooding and full of pain |
by Maple Tree
Thank you for your honesty Alex- I admire that and I too have written something in such a way, that the reader may take a totally different angle on, and thats the beauty of poetry... it can take many different paths and avenues after posting.. thank you again for posting this :-) |
by Maple Tree
Alex- You penned a poem I think any young lady or even us old ladies can relate to... guys as well... those "silly" little things are actually big things in the heart of the person who is experiencing them at the moment... the ending touched me... I too have sat in the rain crying, feeling like I was alone with my silly thoughts and feelings... very powerful piece!! |
by Scum Queen
I actually wrote this for a laugh while sleep deprived. It's, uh, kind of a third person pastiche of a lot of really bad, whiny poetry I've seen on this site. So it's... interesting that someone over the age of 15 read it the way you did. |
Ohh yeah you have no idea! |
I love this! |
by Scum Queen
But is it... just like your life? |