Comments : Silly Little "Feelings"

  • 12 years ago

    by Alyssa Rianne

    I love this!

    • 12 years ago

      by Scum Queen

      But is it... just like your life?

  • 12 years ago

    by Alyssa Rianne

    Ohh yeah you have no idea!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Alex- You penned a poem I think any young lady or even us old ladies can relate to... guys as well... those "silly" little things are actually big things in the heart of the person who is experiencing them at the moment... the ending touched me... I too have sat in the rain crying, feeling like I was alone with my silly thoughts and feelings... very powerful piece!!

    • 12 years ago

      by Scum Queen

      I actually wrote this for a laugh while sleep deprived. It's, uh, kind of a third person pastiche of a lot of really bad, whiny poetry I've seen on this site. So it's... interesting that someone over the age of 15 read it the way you did.
      And I do just mean interesting. I by no means say this to invalidate your reading. My intention may not have been to create something sincere or touching, but I do try to inject genuine humanity into everything I write, and it's actually fantastic to hear, from an adult, that regardless of why I wrote this, enough genuine empathy comes through to create something "powerful".

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Thank you for your honesty Alex- I admire that and I too have written something in such a way, that the reader may take a totally different angle on, and thats the beauty of poetry... it can take many different paths and avenues after posting.. thank you again for posting this :-)