Comments : Stolen Honey (Haiku)

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Lol.the last part made me laugh. I thinj this poem has deep meaning in that honey can be applied to mean alot of things. Like there are alot of pipo who work hard to earn a living but some other pipo can take credit for their work. This poem is amazing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Ah, the cycle of life. The flowers bloom, the bees sip the nectar, the bees produce honey, and then the bear eats the honey.

    Wonderful haiku, Khalid. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh this reminds me of the three little bears lol I don't know why but something about bears and honey's.

    Great Haiku!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Khalid my friend, i love haiku's, especially when they make me smile as much as this one did :-))))

    Seriously im beaming from ear to ear lol

    Great write :-))))