Brilliant thoughts lol! Few words can give books of meanings.

Haha....lol...nice one..liked how you tell of ur love for nature especialy with the relaxing sound of the waterfall.i must say,i never expected that ending,the humour realy was good and gave the piece more life.

LMAO Liz, you funny little wit omgosh....isnt that funny though. The sound of water falling is sooo soothing unless we have to pee, then our pee intensifies lol

Loved this. Interesting topic

OiMG hahahahaha thats so funny, you're really brilliant.

LMAO, Lizz

THIS IS A BOMB!!!!!!!!!

hahhahaha, EPIC EPIC EPIC

Lol... now I don't know anyone who would not laugh at that! It is so funny, that has to be shared with a wider audience lol!

<3 xx

I LOVE THIS!

Isnt it the truth ??

Waterfalls are beautiful, calming and peaceful... but if you have to pee... forget it... they are horrible!! giggles!!

HAHAHAHA.

:)

Haha, I was not expecting that end, brilliant.

Great little poem, starts so serene then reigns us back to normality with the ending.
I would probably add a ';' to the end of when and a ! after pee.
(only my opinion)
made me laugh
regards
Darren

Hahaha .. You hold such power in only few words Liz.

Amazing!!!

HAHAHAHAHA.

That is nothing but the truth!

Fantastic, hilarious haiku, Liz!!! :)

He heheLoveddddd it!

Lol Liz. You're awesome :)

Lol hehe this made me smile. I think you have a great sense of humor and the fact you can write something amusing is a talent because most poets fail to be funny but you succeed.

5/5

Hi there my fellow Aussie!

I read your poetry often but I've been a bit slack in the commenting department. At the moment I have a massive fascination with short poetry so when I saw you had a haiku posted I couldn't resist dropping by to your page.

I must say, I totally didn't expect the last line but it made me smile due to the rawness you presented lol. By raw I mean it was honest and straight to the point. I guess I should learn to expect the unexpected from you huh.

Nice little read for a laugh!
Mel

Haha, this is fantastic (: