Comments : At Least I Did It Right (Collaberation with Thomas)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    WOW!!!!!!!!!

    This can be made into a song;

    The final stanza hit home for me! Beautifull done you guysssssssssss

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I like the rhymes, you guys do know how to do that consistently. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Great collab guys!!!

    Life has given me
    more than I can handle
    I am the fire
    burning the wicker candle
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    I love this stanza - oh awesome stanza!!!

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