At Least I Did It Right (Collab)

by Thomas   Jul 19, 2012


Life has given me
limited options
I'm an old-school cellular
limited functions

Life has given me
more than I can handle
I am the fire
burning the wicker candle

But as long as I keep breathing
my flame won't die
And I will not be stopped
in illuminating the night's sky

And as long as I keep burning
my stars wont fade
and I would never let go
of our promises made

Promises to keep constructing
our palace of love
Not only on this planet
But also in the sky above

And lies will be destruction
our sanctuary of hate
not only in this lifetime
but our testament to fate

To state in conclusion
If my life were to be taken tonight
I hope it will be in a blaze of glory
So I can say: at least I did it right

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This poem is a collaboration between myself and DirgeVenustas1 93 credit must go to him as well

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Great collab guys!!!

    Life has given me
    more than I can handle
    I am the fire
    burning the wicker candle
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    I love this stanza - oh awesome stanza!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I like the rhymes, you guys do know how to do that consistently. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Very good piece as a result of collaboration. I enjoyed the flow.