Comments : Missing Someone (Collab)

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww, really sweet ending, sounds like something that would be said in a romantic film!

    Good work both of you... showing off your talent :) x

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Very nice working with you thomas :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You did a wonderful job here Thomas,
    keep it up
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I absolutely hate the feeling of missing someone, you just don't feel whole when they are gone. They consume your thoughts... it's irritating and all you can think about is how to get them to come back. You and Chelsey captured that perfectly! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Awesome collab!

    So many people will relate to this especially since we all know what it's like to miss someone.

    Great job

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Apologies dance wild
    through my guilt-ridden mind
    Hoping you'll still want me
    In the midst of this bind..

    My fav stanza..

    I love poems dat rhyme..gud work guys..loved ur collab.