Comments : Persistance

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    That made me shudder Sean!!
    My heart is beating so fast and I can see it so real in my mind, that imagery is awesome!

    I feel so cold and freaked out now,
    But I loved this!!!!!!

    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Wow I havnt been here in so long and this was the first poem i read.....Brilliant!
    Your choice of wording was perfect and the imagery was so strong!
    Amazing job Sean =)