Such a mix of beauty and sadness you have penned. Your poems are so difficult to comment and at least for me, a loss of words is a good thing when reading someone, thats how I know they touch my heart deeply. You are an amazing poetess Karla. I find magic in every single thing you write.

This is really great. It really enveloped me. The flow is intoxicating. each stanza offered a little more. I found the end to be touching;
"There is no loss.
The end still sleeps within us." A tender reminder of what awaits...

This is so well done.

"I craved for more
but you shall never understand
why I liked to be in captivity"

^ Karla, this. And the ending is brilliant.

This piece might be my favorite by you to date. Write more please :)

I love this one Karla, I could feel sadness in your words. In awe again!

x