I feel like this piece would benefit more if it has another title..." The shadows" or something else.. Not necessarly my suggestion.

I thought it was sad but also dark how the darkness consumed you wholy. Strangely, but I was picturing some eyes closing and then when the eyes open , they turned dark. :-s nice images though.

The darkness well penned

Nice imagery. I can just see a black figure or maybe black fog just slowly creeping up on you... eerie! I love it, thought.

Lovely dark haiku! :)

I love this because I can relate to it so much. I do feel like darkness takes over me, not anger but more depression.

I love this piece hun

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