Hey that was a pretty good poem. I have some advice for you on your poems but you don't have to use it. |
by Tamila Bob
you have really nice poems i guess you are really into the meaning of life and the way poeople see us im kinda like that too lol.cool poems |
by Ali
okay...the flow wasn't rhyming, but it was good. I think that with a few rhythm adjustments you could really go places...rock on |
by Lipton
You never told me you wrote! Shame on you! Jk. Good poem, though! |
there is something about poetry that is sublime. excellent |
by Cassandra
thanx for the comment I really enjoy your poems |
by Anne Conner
This is a very nice poem, but like some of the others said the rythm needs some work. The message is really good though. |