Comments : Insensibility

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I am glad you were inspired this turned out to be a well written poem that oozes with inspiration. I love the ending the most. The past... Can be inspiring.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Wow, some inspiration. This was beautiful! I adored your ending stanza....we often forget people in our minds but I don't realize they still lie within our heart still....the past can sadden us but sometimes we just have to be thankful for the memories. .

    Loveddddd :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I always find myself going through past messages/letters/IM's.. all that jazz... and I find my heart still shatters as I read them. The same emotions come back and it's like I'm there again...:/

    I really love the last stanza, it's so true. Some people just never leave our hearts.

    Beautiful, emotional poem. <3

  • 12 years ago

    by One Man Clan

    Wow!
    this is a strong one
    the vibes are pure and so vivid,
    it's like you mean everything you wanted to say in the most honest of ways.
    I Truly admire your visibility,
    5/5 No doubt what so ever.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    It is amazing when and where we get our inspiration from, you certainly were inspired because this poem is awesome!!!

    Awesome write hun I LOVE IT

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    :-O

    Meme....oh how this made me sigh and go all droopy, you have this way of painting a picture that is so vivd i feel like im watching your emotions at the cinema.....in 3d.......in hd!

    Just adored the word usage and the pace. That you have to read it in .

    Wonderful as always xx

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    You're soft. Romantic and have a lovely voice that I will never be able to hear. Lol. :)

    Nice piece, Memers.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Lovely piece Meme.

    Totally captivating poetry, beautifully worded.

    Really lovely...
    Xxxxx