Comments : The most despicable friend on Earth

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    "The most despicable friend on Earth
    is that who makes fun of his friend
    in front of people
    just to make them lough"
    ^"lough" should be "laugh" ... and I agree, a 'friend' wouldn't make fun of you just to make others laugh. That is a someone who has a low self esteem themselves, so they belittle others just to take the attention off of them. Not a friend at all.

    "The most despicable friend on Earth
    Is that who broadcasts your news
    and all what you have
    while you trust him strongly"
    ^Another terrible quality of a 'friend'. I've had this problem... you trust them with secrets and the first thing they do is go and gossip. :/

    " The most despicable friend on Earth
    Is that who challenges your back
    and speaks about you
    while being your friend"
    ^I think you are talking about them pretending to be your friend and then talking about you? I think it needs a little revising, I got a little confused. I think it would sound better if it said "The most despicable friend on Earth
    is that who challenges your patience,
    backstabbing every chance,
    pretending to be your true friend."
    or something like that? You don't have to write exactly what I wrote, it's your poem... just my opinion, lol.

    "The most despicable friend on Earth
    Is that who buys you for a new person
    with a good question even though he may
    show pretty face and white heart"
    ^I think you mean that they may be acting nice and innocent on the outside but their heart is dark on the inside. People are manipulative like that. :/

    Overall, nice poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    A true friend knows eveything about you
    and still loves you no matter what.
    A true friend does not judge, is understanding and supportive, yet will
    also tell you the truth, things you don't want
    to hear

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    You have a very giood point and i kinda agree with it, thought it was a meaningful poem. . .

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I think many people can relate to this poem, good job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    No one needs friends like that in our lives. I hate those kinds of people :|

    Great write

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