Nocturnal Arithmetic

by Karla   Jul 21, 2012


When the lights are off,
her Mathematics shrinks:
1,2,3,4.

Karla Bardanza
http://asmoonsewsthesatinstars.blogspot.com
http://skycladatmidnight.tumblr.com

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  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Fear, insomnia, weird disorders and creepy emotions. All expressed in three short lines. Well-done, Mrs Bardanza. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Karla
    This 3 liner begins like a senryu with the 5 ct syllables in the first line...second line is short at least 1 syllable, maybe two depending on how many syllables are in mathematics, and the third line is 4 syllables
    But I think this was done intentionally to go along with the words in this short piece IDK
    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I think that it's either about someone who has insomnia or as Xanthe said, an obsession. Maybe they are counting to try to sleep...

    AWESOME

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I think this is about a hidden obssession. And I can easily relate..