Im alive yet dead

by Haley Doss   Jul 22, 2012


Could this possibly be true?..
Could I be dead?
Living in my own little world..
Or is this all in my head..

Could this possibly be wrong?..
Could I be alive?
Fending for myself in this world..
Trying hard with one big strive..

I'm alone in this world..
Wondering what's fake, whats real..
My heart has been broke before..
And yet has time to heal..

Confusion seeps through my mind..
My broken heart is black..
Wondering if he's alive or dead..
For causing this heart attack..

Could he of killed me?
It seemed as if he took my life..
I feel like I am dead..
But yet i am alive..

Hurting so bad inside..
I try to stay awake..
Im alive yet i feel so dead..
But I've learned from my mistake..

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jhierren Paz

    How nice it would be, I'm not the only one who feels it. haha

    Well, it truly got me into it. Specially the last stanza, I've been always like that.

    I really like your style of your writing. Keep it up! I would likely to see more from you. ^_^

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    Gave me a mental image right away. This is a detailed piece that hold mixed emotions. Great piece. Keep on writing!

    • 12 years ago

      by Haley Doss

      Thank you:) i will keep on writing:) thanks for your support!

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    This is a touching piece, good job..

    • 12 years ago

      by Haley Doss

      Thanks, that means a lot to me. Keep an eye out for more poems everyday :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Haley Doss

    Thank you :)

  • 12 years ago

    by rebeka

    This is amazing:)

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