Burning

Wow...that is a strong poem!!
Awesome message and wow.
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Thats an awesome piece, its structure, wording, and everything in it is perfect:)

I really enjoy reading your poems Andrea, it feels as though there is nothing you cannot do!

You've got a few typos though, as far as I think: "consumated" should be "consummated" and "belifs" should be "beliefs".

Eyes are always intriguing if they are presented in a good way, which you definately did. You keep the suspense throughout this whole piece, which I could imagine to be tough to do, usually the beginning or the end is really captivating, but your whole poem is.
I also like the eerie atmosphere you create with so few words.

Well done. :)

Damn strong imagery and message!