by Colm
For some reason, reading this poem reminded me of the film 'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind.' Its an interesting poem, not wanting to think, wanting to bury your past. I liked the reference to a stone on the mountain of humanity: it was a good novel way to describe how each individual is a small piece of the collective. The puntuation could be revised in the poem in places I felt though, it read a little choppy in some places the way I was reading it. Overall a decent and interesting piece! |