Comments : Unbreakable

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I thought this was a beautiful poem, The impression that I got when I read it is that there are no nights and hence, you can't dream of her beautiful eyes, per se. But no matter what, your soul is attach to her. It doesn't matter if you can dream or not. There is an unbreakable bond between you and her.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    This is simply a beautiful, romantic poem. You don't have to say much but what you have said was lovely. Gorgeous write Mattias!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I'm usually not a big fan of love poems but this is beautiful.
    The lack of punctuation seems accidental but it still flowed perfectly.
    I like the subtle rhymes here and there as well, whether intended or not, it added a nice cadence to the piece.
    I especially love the last line. Keep writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Renssey Heart Vine

    Wow!!!
    it was short but meaningful...
    i really love it