Comments : Princess (acrostic)

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    I LOVE IT Chels!!

    Acrostics are one of my fave forms of poetry, and you nailed it on this one. The use of words show how self confident you are, and the it flowed with an ease from beginning till end.

    Fantasticooo!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I love the imagery you captured. It's exactly how I would expect a Princess to be... iced in jewels and having someone cater to her every need.

    Great job! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I always find Acrostics really hard to write but find that other people can pull them off perfectly.
    I love this...It is a really great acrostic, and now I don't know what else to say.

    You are a princess, Chels. xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this! You did awesome with the form and I love the word princess, it reminds me of calling children that when they are young to make them feel special.

    Awesome write Chels!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Real princess you are! You also used the two words 'PRINCESS' and 'PARADE'. These words added the sweet taste for the poem. Great w2rite lol. I engoyed the reading and flow.