by Exostosis Jul 23, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Of fractal symmetry be our demeanor's |
Lot has been said within 3 lines & lot more could be explored within few words. |
by Darren
I love the thought of 'influence dismay' |
Great job bro. It's been a while. Nice to be reading your work again. |
by Meena Krish
You have no idea how many times I have read and re-read this write! I also had to get help from the dictionary. But I think I got what you are saying: its like how the author feels with all the ill fated things that is currently going on around the world..its a complicated thing but its deep and it does make the reader think very deeply.. |
by Sylvia
OK, I finally got my take on your poem into words and on paper. Here they are. |