The expression 'I knew I'd have you wrapped around my finger' revealed that you can control that person of interest very confidently and that he really has a meaningful importance in your heart, a case that can make all fictional thoughts seem believable. Your thoughts are brilliant my friend. I loved your poem.

"The very moment when my eyes
were taken back by the twinkle of yours,
I knew I'd have you wrapped around my finger,
like this white gold diamond ring is.
I've given thought about how love works,
but I thought that power only laid
in the hands of God and electricity lines-
I was mistaken"
^Some people can just feel a connection at first site...they know they will mean something to each other one day. I love the lines "but I thought that power only laid in the hands of God and electricity lines - I was mistaken" LOVE IT.

"If sidewalks could be paved with pearls,
you'd be the person to convince me that
my birthstone shouldn't just lay upon my neck,
they should reflect off my feet because I,
I deserve to walk on things that are heavenly
You call me your angel after all."
^This is an amazing stanza! This shows that that person cherishes you.

"If mansions could be built next door,
your hands would morph into an architects
White bricks and 4 large pillars
would soar 3 stories high because ,
you'd give nothing less elegant
to your beloved Queen"
^You are his Queen and he wants nothing but the best for you. He would give you anything you desire.

"If horses could bring us freedom,
you'd have a noble white stallion,
in every stall of our stable
For us to gallivant into the sunset
on dreary summer days."
^When I read of white stallions, I always see a prince and princess riding off into the sunset...they just give off a sense of happily ever happy and love.

"They think I'm dreaming fairytales,
and that Disney has got the best of me,
But you, my love...
You have given me every reason to believe
you'll make all my dreams come true."
^I think fairytales do come true.. your own version of a fairytale. It may not mean literally having a mansion or riding off in the sunset, but it means that you are truly happy and content with the one you love. You would do absolutely anything for each other just to bring a smile to their face.

"Thoughts of love at first sight
seemed to just be an expression,
I figure true love fell in the hands of
romance novels and passionate movie scenes
However, I've found a true prince charming
whose made all my fictional thoughts seem
believable."
^I've heard so many people say they think love movies and romance novels are just bullcrap. To an extent, yes... some exaggerate... and some are true stories. The people who don't believe in love have simply never fell in love.

This is a wonderful love poem, it's very sweet and put a smile on my face. :)

"ring is."

^ I think 'is' should be omitted.

I love this from you, Chels.. totally new and perfectly detailed. The 'if' thing added a lot to the content, and I just like how you incorporated 'disney'... awesome.

This is beautiful Chelsey, like you.

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Omg!!!!

Speechless!!! Just wonderful!

Daaaaamn girl!! That was seriously AMAAAAAAAZING!!

Love it love it love it :-))))))))

You write such amazing poems, the way you describe things gives such a powerful image in my mind as I read your words.

I loved the happiness in this poem, I could picture this as something which could be turned into a children's film.

It is so nice to read of a true love poem, with a happy beginning of the real true love feeling, this is something very special and rare. You are lucky to have found this and to be able to write about this so beautifully.

5/5

Speechless, seriously that was awesome

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