Comments : Coherent love

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is a nic write on friendship
    from what I gather, friendship is something
    that needs to be earned, especially where
    the trust is concerned. Once that has been
    established nothing can break that
    friendship apart

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Nice poem. The lines that stood out to me were from this stanza :

    "One day I had a somehow funny dream
    as a man suffering of terrible hunger
    and having nothing to eat but his beloved.
    I woke up so frightened and finally found myself ate half of my pillow!"

    - What a vivid image this creates of the stravation you felt and the choices you had. Such a unique thought to put into a poem.

    nice work