Hi Kayla,

I really enjoyed this poem about new love...the emotions it evokes...there is nothing like it. You do a good job here of letting the reader peer inside to your innermost thoughts, your feelings for this person...so fresh. Greatly enjoyed!

Two critique comments: I would just clean up the grammar and punctuation as I found it to be distracting

Also, the last line is weak...I was looking for something powerful, like fireworks going off...maybe you can come up with something that leaves the reader wanting more just by showing the sheer quality and depth of these emotions.

Good job!!