Andrea, this is awesome, so beautiful and romantic, so sweet, awww...

this is making me cry with the beauty of it, it is just soo lovely to read.

I love the way it was worded, and the line about still feeling the wedding ring being put on your finger, that is just beautiful

much love,
xxx

Awwwwwww thats an awesome piece, I agree with Tara Kay its really romantic.
Happy Anniversary to you two:)

I've read this now maybe 5 times and everytime I do I just think how very beautiful it is...the memory of your special day is obviously still so vivid in your mind and to write a poem to commemorate it two years on is just lovely so...I'm reluctant to point out a little thing I thing are errors...do you mind?

I can still feel you
sliding the ring
upon my wanted finger,
as the sun shined brightly
and the velvet petunias
sang within my hand

I thing it should be wanting finger and it should be the sun shone brightly..

It's beautiful Andrea...

Happy anniversary again. This is beautiful <3 what a sweet dedication, im so happy you are happy.

This is beautiful, Andrea. So romantic and just filled my heart with love and happiness. <3

Happy Anniversary!!!!

Forever, sweet love,
with James you'll be; together,
you deserve the best!

^ Hands you this haiku ^

<3 <3

Beautiful, Andrea

Happy anniversary once again!

I can still feel you
sliding the ring
upon my wanting finger,
as the sun shone brightly
and the velvet petunias
sang within my hand.

This stanza feels so vivid, I could picture you both smiling as well as a small scenario with the details given.

This poem is soooo beautiful and shows the love you have for him perfectly!! I am so happy for you two :)

:'(

Do you know something, I added this to my favourite's before I commented ot rated this. This poem really touched me, very deeply touched me and brought a lot of emotion for me and tears into my eyes.

I know exactly the feeling you are writing about here and I have experienced this. I think you have wrote such a lovely poem about a very special love, a unique love which only happens once in a blue moon but it lasts forever.

I am so happy for you that you have found this and I can feel your emotions and heart went into this poem. It was beautiful and I thank you for sharing this.

Beautiful dedication and composition. All the best to you both on your anniversary.

I don't know why I haven't commented on this until now. But this piece really made me speechless. It's beautiful - filled with genuine love and happiness. I don't usually find poems like this on this site, and I'm so glad you shared this with us. May God bless you two with more years.
Again, happy anniversary. Keep writing!

It is beautiful. It brings back memories of my wedding day.

Happy Anniversary to the both of you

Lots of love

x