My Version of Darkness

You are certainly a queen of poetry. The dark images in this one are brilliant!!!

Awesome, freaky

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Scaryyyy!

U should write horror scripts for movies!!! :P

I agree, this piece is "awesome," very dark and causes internal shivers. Amazing vocabulary use with an equally amazing imagination, I hope. :)

I think what I like about writing is that it often leaves room for interpreation. Your dark poems could be about so much and you word them in such a way that I find myself relating to them and pin pointing them to something in my life which it describes.

I liked this one, I think you have such excellent word choice because you know how to pick the powerful words and manage to group them together to create such dark imagery. amazing.

Andrea, I think this piece is awesome, I sense you are describing how hurtful and poisonous words can be...and the use of serpent makes.me think.of someone unkind and who makes you feel uncomfortable.
I may be wrong, forgive me but just what stands out here.

Great work anyhow
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