Wow what can i say more amazing then what u've written here,,,wow,,It's divine 5/5

MarryAnne,

I know that I promised you a bunch of lenghy, detailed comments. And I'm sorry I couldn't keep that promise. Now that I am in the mood of analysing poetry, guess it's easier. But I'm warning ya it's all rambling.

I love reading poetry that motivates my mind (wich oftentimes doesn't work anyway), it makes me realy think of life and God. And the way you began it with the image of a big, warm church is just chilling. I love historical or religious places so much that I might even begin to shove them into my poetry.
:)
I loved the 'peaceful' atmosphere to this piece, in particular, when speaking of God to be endlessly giving and guiding us. I find that really solacing.

'For I've ran away a hundred days,
erased the truth about me in a million paragraphs'

Oh, I loved this.
I would use 'erasing' instead though. And yep 'run'. Haha I am not meaning to correct anything here. Really. I am just thinking out loud. ;)

Loved this poem and I'm now off to check the rest!