Comments : Closing curtains

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow, this is a really deep poem... and in such few words.

    My favorite part was:
    I can hear my bones breaking
    under the weight of my doubts.

    ^^ the idea of your bones breaking shows how heavy your doubts are, and how much pain it is causing you. Very powerful!

    A very well-written poem. Well done!

  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    Great poem loving it.