Comments : Breaking Point

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Very nice write. I enjoyed reading.
    Just the last line 'Just say you've reached you're breaking point.'
    The words 'you're' should read 'your'

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    To be honest, is the most courageous and best thing to do and also stops the pressure from building up.

    Well done, hun:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Nice poem. I love it!
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by STEVE

    Great poem,very meaningful,been there myself just recently keep smiling!

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Loved it.
    so sad. but i've felt like this before.
    depression sucks.