Comments : Tired

  • 12 years ago

    by Rebirth

    Funny thing, this poem sounds so familiar. Guess life just has it's way of dumping it's shit on us.

  • 12 years ago

    by Krysten

    I enjoyed reading this poem dispite how sad it is. Its definitely relatable, i have feel this way often in my life. I love the rhyme scheme you used, perfect for this piece. All around its a wonderful piece full of raw emotion (which always makes for good poetry.) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem invokes a lot of sad emotion, it well written and draws the reader perfectly.
    Beautiful job, The layout is also very interesting!