A poem of so sorrowful real story which came in time. You're are an inspired person who translated real actions into a poem for memories. Brilliant lay out lol. I enjoyed it to the maximum extent. |
by Xanthe
This is a beautiful piece, though it is sad. It's a great dedication. I wish I had more votes left :( |
by Xanthe
Double posted. Sorry, this was just too beautiful :) |
by Baby Rainbow
I did like this one, I thought it was so devasting and heart wrenching but at the same time it was so thoughtful that you chose to write about this and dedicate a memory of him to people who never knew him. You create empathy for him with this poem because how often have we all felt the weight of the world on our shoulders? It just goes to show that you never really know what someone else is dealing with. |
by Meme
Although what happened is really sad indeed, but this is a great dedication to this man. Not an exception to the quality of pieces you deilever, always perfectly penned Liz. |
by L
If only the weight was |
What loving dedication to someone |
by Tara Kay
I can't comment right now, but :O |
by Karla
Suicide is our last cry when nobody is hearing us.I feel for him. Great tribute my friend. |
by Wild flower
Aaaaaaah thats so sad:( I hate these things.. |
by Tara Kay
Liz, I am sorry that I didn't comment properly when you posted this, I was sort of in shock and the content was to my heart as you know... |
by Darren
It couldn't have been easy to witness this and writing a poem will help. I like how you show great compassion for somebody you didn't know yet took the time to step back and appreciate the hurt some people will feel from this. |
What a tragic thing.. to be so desperate to end it all. I know the feeling and it's one of isolation. Excellent write about complete sadness. |
by nouriguess
I missed your writes. Where are you? |
Liz, this poem really moved me and spoke to my heart. I think you did well covering this topic and I liked your title as I thought it was well picked. |
by Amy
Such tragedy you penned so well.. Beautiful tribute. |